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Friday, September 7, 2018

10 minute writing challenge

Today we had to do a 10-minute writing challenge which is where we get given a picture and we had to write for 10 minutes straight about that picture our picture was a person who was stuck in the wall. Here is mine. In 1967 Running to escape the Nazi concentration camps Josef was sprinting into the local dairy where there was something waiting for him to pick him up to go to England or so he thought. When he eventually arrived at the local dairy he started balling his eyes out he soon found that it was a despicable trap that the Nazis had set up to catch Jewish pupils trying to flee as soon as he walked in the nazis fumbled to the door Josef ran and ran his heart out but with the Nazis bleeming right behind him Josef ran into the wall but Josef had a trick up his sleeve he could go through walls and humans if he was in danger so Josef dashed up to the wall but all of a sudden time just magically stopped. He was frozen there partly inside the wall time started again but this time he had lost his powers feeling like his heart just got ripped out straight from his body Josef sat there looking at the sky for eternity. the was stuck in the wall permanently and there was nothing him or the Nazis could do about.

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