Tuesday, August 2, 2016
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Your story flows well, Eben. The pictures go well with the words and the story has a clear flow. Next step - add even more detail when Mr. Eben gets sent on a mission.
ReplyDeleteThank you for taking me on this trip Eben and I am glad you did not disintegrate. Do you feel that you have told your reader enough about the different characters in your story?
ReplyDeleteI would have loved some more detail about them.
I look forward to your next blog post.
Hi Im karl from Papakura-central-school
ReplyDeleteWow great Work how'd you do that!!!!?!!