my recount

In kauri this week we have been learning to do recounts.my recount is about my trip to tinmaru our focus was to use paragraphs.punncuation and who what when were why hope you enjoy In the morning me and my family were packing to go to Timaru the cat was very upset but we were very excited. Then when we were ready to go dad started up the youte and we hit the road we had to get there early so we packed us raps. When we got to Ashburton we stopped and had our lunch it was delicious and a bit spicy but after that let's just say i needed a lot of water. When we got there my brother was getting ready for his game it was against Marlborough and it was really bad because of what how Malbrough,s playing style was like after the first game we went to the sticky cafe and got me a pineapple lump cheesecake anyone we were getting ready for game 2. Game 2 was really upsetting because they injured darius my brother me dad got the cold spray as quick as we can darius was ok though after the game he had his lunch and it was time to go home . After Darius had his lunch he headed into the car at Ashburton we stopped for a peach tree hopefully it brings us lots of peaches. In conclusion it was the best trip i've ever done at i had a wonderful time.